I thought her ability to live in an apartment in NY while "scraping by with factchecking jobs from her uncle & his friends" seemed unlikely, and the ending? A little too trite. But overall, I thought it was pretty good. Although I'm notoriously easy to please in reading material.
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Date: 2007-06-07 02:14 pm (UTC)