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[sgorny]

I've never written pr0n - and probably shouldn't....

Justin moaned, reaching back to grab the hips pistoning in him.

"Brian," he called, his voice tracing the syllables.

Breath hitching, Brian pressed his forehead between Justin's shoulderblades. He sucked the skin there, watching it bloom purple-red, marking Justin as his.

"Uhnnn..." the blond cried, calling out his emotions.

Brian tried to still his voice, knowing that to say too much would be the end of him.

See why I don't write pr0n?

Comments

[thanks-thankyou.livejournal.com]

Me thinks you have been deprived in the sex department if its over as quick as your story ;)

[qafhappy.livejournal.com]

I wanted to see if I could do a sex scene. This IS very short... and not too good. It's a hurdle I need to get over... the angst about writing sex.

[thanks-thankyou.livejournal.com]

I had written 5 scripts in high school and a novel that I finished right after high school - all without a sex scene in them. When I first starting reading fanfic it was for Buffy/Angel. I eventually wanted to try it, but I honestly didn't think I could write a sex scene. In my second book I did write one, but it was short (hetero), and I wasn't impressed by it.

But when I started writing the fanfic, I was able to let lose. It took a while, but I was like, this isn't going to a publisher or anything. This is my fantasy of what I want these characters to be doing....so I went for it. And while I do still have some pretty dark Buffy/Angelus fic out there on the net, I, of course, only write B/J now. That Buffy thing has long since passed.

But I was pretty aprehensive about it myself. You just have to say they are your fantasies. Describe what you see in your fantasies about the boys (cuz u know u have them...lol). It gets easier.

Just let go. Like me...course, I'm not saying I write the best sex scenes, I have always been told my dialogue was always my strongest suits, or first person POV. But, if my sex scenes turn people on, then I'm certain you can write them. Yours was good, just gotta make it longer.

Hehe...it's always about size, isn't it?

[qafhappy.livejournal.com]

Size is key!

I'll try to write a little longer pr0n snippet tonight, just to be my... feet... wet, so to speak.

I'd try right now, but I'm at work, and need to get into the zone to write (impossible because of interruptions here).

[thanks-thankyou.livejournal.com]

I know about being in the 'zone'. I'm sitting at my computer at home talking w/ my friend on MSN, and I can't get there with my G/R story. argh. Frustrating. And it isn't writers' block (eek!) it's not knowing the direction I want these 2 to take. Gale is still standing in the doorway waiting to an answer for his question. Argh! *bangs head on desk*

[qafhappy.livejournal.com]

Oooooooooooo! I'm a huge fan of GR RPS!!

[liasantana.livejournal.com]

Oh, I suck at writing pr0n. Seriously, my try-hard porn reads like computer manuals.

-.-

"Brian," he called, his voice tracing the syllables.

Heh. I like that - tracing the syllables. :)

[qafhappy.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[ivannaseto.livejournal.com]

hey i thought that was hot-although a bit short!!!